Poetry

Today we did a poetry lesson Imaginary and sensing. We all wrote poems on our picture we imagined. This is one of mine. See if you can guess what the image is or the place.

5,4,3,2,1

Blast off

Up we go

The twinkly stars brighten’s my eyes

As we go deeper and deeper

The moons bright white light

Illumines the whole area

The black background makes it scary

I wonder when  this silent place make a big bang

Whenever I come here on the space ship

It makes me feel like I discovered this wonderful place!

One thought on “Poetry

  1. I liked how you used words like illuminates to make it more interesting. I think you’re in a spaceship. If you wanted to extend you could make a longer poem.
    Charlie

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