Hi Jett, I really liked that you have included some bullet points. I had found a lot of points that I had included and I thought you had written it very neatly!😆😝
Hi Alexia, I found many similar thing that I had written. It was really clear and set out well so well done.
I really like in what you have written even if it is short. I like how you have summarised some of the quotes and maybe next time just write a bit more.